Saturday, June 17, 2017

A Senryu, a Something, & a 2 Versions of a Tanka

Sun beats down all day.
Fans blow the air around,
drying our sweat.

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Sitting outside,
I scared the feral cats,
who only know me through
glass windows.

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Lalla wrote that
she became a lotus
not a sedge flower,
which she thought was better
But aren't both beautiful?

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Lalla wrote that
she became a lotus
not a sedge flower.
But I like weedy sedge flowers.
Some will say I missed her point.