Trying Tanka. I'm missing some syllables. I'm not sure if the "less is more" approach to syllables holds with Tanka like it does with Haiku. More to learn!
Outside are birdsong
and white and purple flowers --
I listen sometimes,
and sometimes really see,
but I'm no monk.
Sunday, May 24, 2015
Outside are birdsong...
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Birdsong,
flower,
imperfection,
lack of mindfulness,
listen,
mindfulness,
monk,
outside,
purple,
see,
white