Showing posts with label thorn. Show all posts
Showing posts with label thorn. Show all posts

Thursday, August 10, 2023

Blackberry Season

I reach for 
another blackberry,
thorn in my thumb.


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Grabbing despite thorns,
I eat a blackberry,
hot from the sun. 

Monday, August 5, 2019

Wednesday, May 10, 2017

Senryu or Haiku? And what's Tanka?

After you read the link, you'll understand why I often think I should have named this blog "Sorta Kinda Senryu." But, as is obvious from reading my earlier writing, I didn't really know what Haiku were, let alone Senryu. And I'd heard of Tanka before, but never tried to write one. I've only written a couple. Here's one I wrote this morning.

Blackberry flowers, 
white & delicate in the sun; 
milk thistle purple 
fringe on the green, thorny stalk; 
nothing ripe yet.

https://akitahaiku.com/what-are-haiku-senryu-and-tanka/

Thursday, May 19, 2016

I love my neighbors' blackberry bushes.

Thorny green branches - - 
white flowers, but no berries. 
The blackbirds will wait.

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Thorny branches stray 

over the old gray fence - - 
no blackberries yet.