Don’t tug!
Like everything else,
blackberries
come off their vines easily
when they are ready.
—-
Summer heat—
Dandelions stare at the sun
unharmed.
—-
To fill a pie, use
both ripe and unripe berries.
As in the world,
sweet and sour are needed
for the desired taste.
I’m not happy with this one. It needs work. Too didactic & not natural.
—
Hopeful,
a bee hovers over
a glass of lemonade.
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Sunday, August 4, 2019
Wednesday, May 10, 2017
Senryu or Haiku? And what's Tanka?
After you read the link, you'll understand why I often think I should have named this blog "Sorta Kinda Senryu." But, as is obvious from reading my earlier writing, I didn't really know what Haiku were, let alone Senryu. And I'd heard of Tanka before, but never tried to write one. I've only written a couple. Here's one I wrote this morning.
Blackberry flowers,
white & delicate in the sun;
milk thistle purple
fringe on the green, thorny stalk;
nothing ripe yet.
https://akitahaiku.com/what-are-haiku-senryu-and-tanka/
Blackberry flowers,
white & delicate in the sun;
milk thistle purple
fringe on the green, thorny stalk;
nothing ripe yet.
https://akitahaiku.com/what-are-haiku-senryu-and-tanka/
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Monday, August 3, 2015
Don't worry, Blackbird.
Don't worry, Blackbird.
There are enough ripe berries
for both of us.
There are enough ripe berries
for both of us.
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